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Tuesday 8 October 2024

JAYNE BAMBER, JUST BETWEEN US: AUTHOR GUEST POST, EXCERPT, GIVEAWAY.

 


Hello, readers! It's a treat to be back at My Jane Austen Book Club to share about my newest release. My eleventh novel, Just Between Us is available for pre-order, and at the end of this post I’ll be sharing an excerpt from this Pride & Prejudice retelling….

 Jane Austen once said, “My characters shall have, after a little trouble, all that they desire.” I give the Bennet sisters more than just a little trouble. Kitty has a minor heartbreak when her unrequited crush marries another, while Lizzy and Darcy have a whirlwind courtship but are separated for two years, and Jane gets her man but at a very steep cost. 

 Elizabeth and Darcy’s story takes center stage, beginning and ending with fluffy romance, and lots of angst in the middle. And in the background, there is a juxtaposition in the marriages of Jane, whom Lizzy used to be close with, and Kitty, who has bonded with Lizzy in the aftermath of Jane betraying them by colluding with Caroline. 

 Jane is not evil but morally gray at the beginning of the story, and her marriage is fraught with disappointment and disconnection due to both her and her husband, unbeknownst to one another, each conspiring with his pernicious step-sister, to the detriment of those they love, especially Darcy and Lizzy. 

 Meanwhile, Kitty ends up with Mr. Collins fairly early in the story, and though it’s not a union she had expected, they end up ridiculously happy together. In this variation, Captain Darcy, a second son who inherits Rosings in a roundabout way, decides to take Mr. Collins under his wing. Initially, he does this to please Elizabeth by rendering her father’s heir a bit more sensible, but as Collins is to be his neighbor in Kent, he also hopes to draw him out of Lady Catherine’s influence. 

When Mr. Collins and Kitty wed, Captain Darcy recommends they take in the culture of London together on their honeymoon, and he later calls on them often in Kent, discussing books and playing chess with Mr. Collins. 

 And when Elizabeth visits Hunsford in the spring, her arrival at the parsonage is another stark contrast to canon. Charlotte speaks pragmatically about having her own home and hints at the ways that she avoids Mr. Collins - in ‘Just Between Us’ Kitty is even more enthusiastic about her shelves in the closet, and she embraces the home life she has with her husband, even gardening and enjoying other activities with him.  

 And so, even though it is a small part of the story, I’d like to share a glimpse into Elizabeth’s visit to the Collinses in Hunsford…

                                                                                                                                      JAYNE BAMBER



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Kitty was fairly bouncing with joy as Mr. Bennet handed Elizabeth down from the carriage. The sisters shared a warm and tearful embrace; only when Kitty drew away did she betray an expression of surprise at Elizabeth’s altered appearance. It was but a flicker of surprise that she quickly dispelled, but Elizabeth knew her sister well enough to dread the inevitable commiseration.

Mr. Collins was as full of chatter as ever, though he was no longer the silly, simpering ninny she had once thought him. Though he had a great deal to say, he expressed himself well, and Elizabeth was touched by the glow of pride on Kitty’s face. 

A tour of the parsonage was offered, and the Collinses eagerly led their guests through the charming house. There was much said of the furnishing and arrangements, but it was all Kitty’s effusions at the warm and comfortable qualities of her new home. She was eager to show Elizabeth her contentment, and Elizabeth was happy for her sister.

Mr. Collins could not resist some little praise of Lady Catherine’s contribution to his domestic felicity, but he spoke of the improvements she had made with so little deference as to leave Mr. Bennet visibly disappointed. He then invited them to take a stroll in the garden, which was large and well laid out. 

“My dear Kitty and I attend to the cultivation ourselves, and I believe it is one of our favorite ways to pass an afternoon together,” he told Elizabeth. Kitty had led Mr. Bennet far enough down the path as to be out of hearing, and Mr. Collins gave his wife a flirtatious wave of his hand, which caused her to blush very prettily as she smiled broadly at her husband.

Elizabeth covered a laugh with a little cough as Mr. Collins reddened, perhaps considering other means of enjoying an afternoon with his lovely and loving wife. He regained his composure and pointed out a rose bush of which he was particularly proud, for it was a variation grown only at Rosings, and had been gifted to the Collinses upon their return from London. 

“This is called the Red Rarity - is the color not remarkable? And you will notice the astonishing fullness of the blossoms, compared to the floribunda. And yet they are quite easy to care for, when one is well versed in such things.”

Elizabeth did her best to give an appropriate reply, but as she stared at the roses, she could think only of their gifter. Captain Darcy had truly been such a kind friend to her sister and cousin, and a small and selfish part of Elizabeth wished to believe that he had done so for her sake.

When they reached the back of the garden, the most splendid view yet was to be presented, and even Mr. Collins could not resist waxing poetic on the impressive vista. Kitty repeated all his effusions, pointing out everything remarkable in the sprawling estate situated at the top of a rolling hill just beyond the grassy meadow spotted with wildflowers. 

The sun broke through a swath of fluffy mammatus clouds, casting its rays down on the majestic house that surpassed even the picture Mr. Collins had once painted. It was as if even the heavens conspired to taunt Elizabeth with what she had lost, as the pale gray stone glowed in the sunlight before the cloud shifted once again, sending the view into shadow. 

That Captain Darcy was master of such a place caused Elizabeth to tremble at her own insignificance. Perhaps she might have been mistress of Rosings, happily ensconced in the library with the man she loved, had tragedy not separated them - or perhaps after four months away, the master of such a grand estate had forgotten her. Perhaps she had pined in vain for a gentleman who was now too far above her. 

The clouds darkened, and Mr. Collins hastened them back indoors before it should rain. He was particularly attentive to his wife, and Elizabeth’s aching heart warmed at the sight of it. He began to lead them to the parlor, the first room they had seen and praised, and he suggested they all sit by the fire and speak of London. Elizabeth had little to say of her stay there, for though she had gone to many places and met with many new acquaintance of her aunt’s, none had held any appeal. It had been as if a shade of grey was thrown over everything, but she could hardly say as much to her new brother. 

Instead she was happy to listen as he extolled upon his own impressions of the capitol, his fascination with all the art he had seen at the Royal Exhibition, his enthusiasm for the theater, and his surprising fondness for Hatchard’s. 

“I would not have thought to visit such a remarkable shop, but Captain Darcy insisted I do so. And what do you think? When we did visit, on the third day - or no, was it the fourth day, my blossom? At any rate, when we did go to Hatchard’s, I meant only to purchase a little book of poetry for my lovely bride, and I happened to strike up a conversation with the shopkeeper, an excellent fellow. And what did you think he told me? Only that he had been expecting me, and that Captain Darcy had set aside a sum for my purchasing several volumes of a philosophical nature. I was bowled over at such generosity, though I was obliged to own that knew little of the subject. But the good shopkeeper was everything amiable, and obliged me in selecting several volumes that Captain Darcy himself favors. We have been discussing together them every Friday afternoon.”

“Indeed?” Elizabeth could scarcely conceal her astonishment. “Pray, what have you been reading?”

“David Hume and John Locke, and of course Samuel Coleridge,” Mr. Collins replied with a twinkle in his eye, as if knowing this must be a surprise. “I confess I had not the experience of so many of my peers at university, in the sort of lively philosophical discussions that I have enjoyed with Captain Darcy. He is a clever man, and I have often been quite overcome by his grasp of the material, which far outstrips my own comprehension. Still, I find it edifying and exceedingly enjoyable when I am able to consider such weighty notions and see something of them in what I have been taught to preach. Though Captain Darcy has declined to examine my sermons in advance, as Lady Catherine once did, I believe he has begun to enjoy them a great deal more than when first I came, and so I believe it would not be vanity on my part to surmise that I have been greatly improved by my scholarly pursuits.”

“Then I shall anticipate Sunday morning with great pleasure, sir.”

“You must call me William - or better, still, Brother. And you must speak to me of books as much as you choose while you are here. I know your tastes must be similar, for I recall how you and Captain Darcy had your literary discussions in Hertfordshire. I cannot promise I shall read Miss Wollenstonecraft with you, but I am presently contemplating Paradise Lost, and I shall venture a guess that you have read it already.”

“I cannot claim it a favorite, but perhaps you might read a favorite passage to us this evening?” Elizabeth could scarcely believe the words as they passed her lips, but she was perfectly in earnest. 

Eager as she was to hear from Captain Darcy how Mr. Collins’s unlikely education had come about, it was Kitty who sated Elizabeth’s curiosity. She invited Elizabeth to join her in a smaller parlor on the other side of the house, which had been appointed for her particular use. 

“Is my husband not an excellent man after all?” Kitty smiled as she sipped her tea. 

“I am all astonishment,” Elizabeth said. “But of course we ought to have trusted Charlotte - she did say it would prove to be a fine match for you. And are you happy, Kitty?”

“I am, Lizzy, truly. Our stay in London was just what was needed, I think. Away from Longbourn, to be in a place where all was new and thrilling for us both, there was such a sense of wonder and excitement in beginning our lives together. And Captain Darcy had been so good to us. His influence over William is truly a blessing, and I enjoy his company, though at times their discussions are more than I can follow. There are times when he has to simplify whatever he is explaining, if William asks a great many questions, and then it is such a relief to hear his ideas expressed in a way that I can make out, without exposing my own ignorance.”

“You need not be embarrassed, Kitty,” Elizabeth cried. “You are not to blame for your want of education, for we both know it was Lydia who frustrated our parents’ efforts!”

Kitty laughed, sending a little splash over the side of her tea cup. She ignored it and said, “I have been clever in my own way, Lizzy. I have always taken care to write to you on Saturday, so that the following Friday I will have a letter from you to read during Captain Darcy’s visits, and when there is a lull in conversation I make mention of whatever you have written of.”

“Oh dear,” Elizabeth said. There was little in her letters that would not have betrayed her low spirits, and she was mortified that any of it might have been repeated to Captain Darcy. 

“Abigail is also keen to meet you,” Kitty said. “She and Mr. Taylor are to dine with us tomorrow; I invited Captain Darcy, but he is to dine at the dower house, for his cousin arrives in the morning. But then we shall dine the following day with Lady Catherine, for she likes to keep the numbers even.”

“His cousin is coming to Kent? Good Heavens, Lydia will be wild with envy,” Elizabeth quipped, hoping her jest belied the tremendous agitation in her heart at the prospect of seeing Captain Darcy. 

“Perhaps if she attempted to improve herself as William and I do, we might invite her to the parsonage to stay with us sometime, while the colonel is visiting Rosings,” Kitty said smugly. 

“For now we shall savor the delights ourselves,” Elizabeth agreed, for she had found Colonel Fitzwilliam to be excellent company in Meryton - when her youngest sister was not swooning over him. 

“And shall you savor the delights of Captain Darcy’s company?” Kitty waggled her eyebrows. 

There was no point in pretending with Kitty, who had known of Elizabeth’s heartbreak since the night of the Netherfield ball. And the look in her eyes told Elizabeth that her sister could see how she had despaired in the months since then. 

“Your separation has taken a toll on you, Lizzy,” Kitty said before Elizabeth could do more than choke back a sob.




ABOUT THE BOOK

When Charlotte Lucas’s twin brother returns to Meryton after four years in the navy, he rivals even Mrs. Bennet as a meddling matchmaker. Captain Oliver Lucas introduces his two dearest friends, Elizabeth Bennet and Captain Fitzwilliam Darcy, and their discreet courtship begins on the very same night that Elizabeth discovers her childhood friend harbors a secret which will later alter the course of their lives.

As Elizabeth’s romance blooms, Jane faces an ultimatum from her mother, and takes drastic measures to secure her engagement to Mr. Bingley. Jane’s collusion with Caroline Bingley estranges her from her sisters when she causes a calamitous chain reaction that jeopardizes the happiness of more than one of her sisters, and has even more disastrous results for the Darcy family.

In the two years that Elizabeth and Captain Darcy are separated, their lives are consumed by tragedy and despair, though neither can let go of their memories of the love they once shared. Meanwhile, the Bingley marriage flounders when both Jane and Charles Bingley are haunted by the mistakes of their past, led afoul by a cruel and conniving Caroline.

When Elizabeth & Captain Darcy are finally reunited, they must confront their painful history before they can begin anew together, and in doing so give hope to those they love. The long-suffering Bingleys attempt their own reconciliation with help from an older and wiser Lydia Bennet, as well as the charming and mischievous Colonel Fitzwilliam. A house party full of familiar faces and new characters alike sets the scene for romance, and amidst the revelry and reminiscing, more than one couple finds their happily ever after, proving that time does heal all wounds.



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