Very
little is known about the young man that Jane Austen met during a seaside
holiday in 1800. Her sister was later to say that she believed this young man
was falling in love with Jane and was someone she felt was truly worthy of her
sister. What transpired that summer? Perhaps it happened this way …
Jane begins her search for love with giddy
optimism, but her first encounter proves devastating. The young Irishman who
captured her heart is convinced by his family that marrying a penniless
clergyman’s daughter would be a terrible mistake. Jane resolves never again to
succumb to false hope, romantic delusions, and pathetic heartbreak.
Lieutenant Frederick Barnes is on medical
leave from the Royal Navy. By the time he crosses paths with Jane, she has lost
her faith in love and is determined to protect her heart at all costs.But the
Lieutenant is captivated and equally determinedto break through her defenses. Jane
must battle between what she knows and what she feels. What will happen to her
heart if she is wrong again?
Read an excerpt
It was after one o’clock in the morning when I climbed out
of bed, pulled back the curtains for moonlight, and began to dress. The
rustling awoke Cassie. I told her to return to sleep, but that the warm air was
too much for me. If I could only steal down to the waves, and feel the cool
water wash over my ankles, I should cool down immediately.
“You cannot be serious. To go down to the beach? At this
hour?” Cassie inquired in disbelief.
“Go back to sleep. I shall return very shortly.”
Of course, she did not return to sleep. She scrambled out
of her bed and into her clothes, fussing at me all the while. And she quietly
followed me out of the house and down to the beach … as I fully intended for
her to do.
Thank goodness Mr. Shaw’s house was situated so close to
the water. The night air had such a cooling effect, that immersion in the water
could no longer exactly be regarded as a necessity. But this was no time for
half measures. The waves beckoned and the full moon revealed a deserted
landscape. What unparalleled opportunity; we were utterly alone! I made haste
to pull my clothes off, amidst Cassie’s horrified protests.
“Jane! Jane! You were only to dip your ankles in. Have you
gone mad?” she pleaded.
“Tonight, the sea belongs to you and me alone, Cassie. But we
must take advantage, for this circumstance will never come again.”
I ran into the waves, my loud squeals buried by the roar of
the waves. It was an extraordinary peak of sensation. The cold water was
exhilarating, but the freedom was an even more potent drug.
“Jane, you must not go so far in. You could drown.”
“And when I do, the entire family will wonder why you did
not trouble yourself to pull me to safety,” I goaded.
To underscore my words, I allowed the next incoming wave to
knock me to my knees. By the time I righted myself, I was rewarded with a view
of my alarmed sister scrambling out of her dress. I greeted her pained,
cautious entry with a series of drenching splashes. Which of course, she could
only answer with frantic retaliation. Her screams and laughter were even louder
than mine. It was such a fine and keen moment of experience; I knew the memory
would be with us for years to come. And never had the advantages of
spinsterhood been so fully apparent. For what husband would have allowed such
activities? That night, we floated in the waters of freedom and contentment.
And envied no one.
************
My spirits were fully rejuvenated the next
day as we awaited the arrival of the lieutenant and his brother. The giddiness
of our moonlight adventures could overpower any discomfort or annoyance that
the lieutenant could inflict.
Our guests arrived amidst a flurry of introductions and
pleasantries. The medical expertise of Dr. Barnes provided a great fascination
for his elderly hosts: a future resource for the daily aches and pains of
advanced years. He was normally situated in Portsmouth, tending primarily to
naval casualties, and had only stolen away for the occasion of his brother’s
convalescence.
Cassie had just left the room to get water and refreshments
when an innocent commentary from Mr. Shaw on the fine weather and full moon of
the previous night turned the conversation down an alarming path.
“Astronomy is a great passion with me and the stars were
magnificent last night,” the lieutenant enthused.
“You have a telescope, then?” my father inquired.
“A very powerful one,” he replied.
His brother confessed that while he had some small interest
in the stars, it was not sufficiently strong to keep himself awake until two
o’clock in the morning, no matter how often the lieutenant had requested his
company.
“No matter. I had all the company I needed last night,” the
lieutenant announced mysteriously.
“Well, I know we cannot suspect Aunt Doherty. So where did
you obtain company at that hour of the night?” Dr. Barnes challenged.
“As it happens, I chanced to cast my lens over to the
ocean. And I was rewarded by the sight of two of the most beautiful seals I
have ever seen. Playing delightfully on the beach.”
He looked me straight in the eye and added, “Females, I
believe.”
“Mr. Shaw marveled, “You could tell at that distance?? That
is a wondrous lens.”
No. No. No. No. No. No. No. It cannot be. I refused to
believe it. I had done nothing so terrible in life that I should be thus
punished. It was a misunderstanding, surely. A concoction of my overheated
imagination. He certainly must be referring to the sight of two actual seals,
and not two naked sisters who were frolicking in complete, total, absolute, and
utter privacy. Heinous villain! The little smile lingering on the corner of his
lips left no hope, but pointed to the bleakest interpretation. Oh, no. I am
ever armed to do battle, but … what of my poor sister?
“Pray, do not mention this incident to Cassandra, as she is
exceedingly fearful of seals, and the very mention of them would induce a
trauma,” I warned threateningly.
“Dear, dear,” Mr. Shaw worried.
I continued, “All earthly and heavenly justice would demand
the most unimaginable punishment to anyone who would purposely upset as dear a
soul as our Cassie.”
“Jane!” my mother admonished.
Lieutenant Barnes soothed, “Ma’am, you are assured of my
silence.”
Whereupon Cassie rejoined us and great efforts were made by
all to redirect the conversation into safe and mundane territories. Another
half hour and Mr. Shaw was obliged to excuse himself, for he had a regularly
scheduled walk with his friend Mr. Maxwell every afternoon.
“Perhaps we shall see those seals along the beach,” he
mused.
Then he remembered himself, and patted Cassie on the
shoulder with a penitent sigh. “I’m so sorry, my dear. I quite forgot.”
About the author
Carolyn V. Murray had The Odyssey read to
her before she was even in kindergarten. Then spent her childhood buried in
books, and only came up for air long enough to run to the library and make her
next selection. It would be many years before she realized that she could write
stories of her own.
Her "9-5" life included the good
(teaching) the bad (working in casinos) and the ugly (catering in an electric
clown suit.) Her writing path took a long detour into the pursuit of
screenwriting, where she got selected as a Walt Disney Writing Fellow, had four
original screenplays optioned, and wrote one freelance script that made it to
the TV screen.
But these days, she's a lot more excited
about creating the kinds of books that sustained her childhood. She is drawn to
history, biography, love stories, and travel. Jane by the Sea is her first novel.
17 comments:
I'm intrigued! Thanks for sharing!
I love the story line idea, and enjoyed the exert. New author for me (always a good thing!), and I can't wait to read the rest!
WOW! I would love to read Jane by the Sea!
Think this is very intriguing! Thank you for the giveaway.
Sounds like a good story. Love the cover. kamundsen44@yahoo.com. kim
Sounds like Jane enjoys the feelings of freedom and self expression the the water and waves afforded them that dark night.
I was a bit iffy about the scene at the ocean's edge, but it did bring up a delicious turn of story about the seals. ;)
What an interesting choice for a 1st novel! I'm interested as I like stories about "THE AUTHOR". Best wishes!
Ive always been interested in this time of her life when she met this man. Now there is a novel about it and it is on my to be read list!
I always love learning more about Jane Austen’s life! Her seaside holiday is a great idea for a book; and the cover is charming :) .
I MUST read this!!!
LOVE the cover......
thank you for the giveaway............
Glad so many of you liked the cover. My designer is a British woman living in the Lake District, whose name happens to be Jane! (How's that for a good omen?)
And I'm glad you liked the excerpt. Although it shows a very rocky early acquaintance, I hope you find it develops into the love story that many of us wished for Jane Austen.
Oh, wow! This story sounds wonderful! What an amazing way with words. Female seals indeed. I had a few chuckles and am smiling. Thank you for the generous give away.
Heinous villain! muahaha how mean! :D
I have really like the excerpt! On my to be read list (I need days of 30 hoours!!)
will have to keep an eye out for more books in the future from this author
You have my attention! Thank you for the giveaway!
Lovely idea for a story.
Ann
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