A word from the author
Hello Maria Grazia, thank you for welcoming me back
to your blog! Below is an excerpt from the beginning of Spells and Shadows,
my new Pride & Prejudice fantasy variation. Fleeing an evil necromancer and
his followers, Darcy had ended up in the river. Elizabeth and Jane happen upon
him when they are wandering along Longbourn’s riverside property.
Can Elizabeth and Darcy protect themselves and their families from the necromancer’s plots? What will happen when learn each other’s secrets? Can Elizabeth and Darcy’s love survive when it is entangled in a web of secrets, spells, and shadows?
Read an excerpt
“Lizzy, be
careful!” Jane Bennet called as her sister Elizabeth shimmied up the pine tree.
Today Elizabeth was wearing trousers and intended to take advantage of the
freedom they afforded her. She wished she could wear them more often but had
promised her mother that she would only wear them around the Bennet family’s
Longbourn estate.
Elizabeth
climbed as high as she could before taking in the view. Most of the land
belonged to her family, including a section of the riverbank along the River
Lea. A few small fishing boats were visible downstream, but there were no
barges or large boats close to Longbourn.
She was about to
climb down when she glimpsed a flash of blue mixed in with greens and browns at
the edge of the river. Trees and plants always grew in an unruly mess on the
riverbank, so it was difficult to distinguish anything clearly. Was it a scrap
of fabric? Heavens! It was more than a scrap; it was a sleeve, attached to an
arm and a head. Oh no! A dead body.
Then the man’s
head moved infinitesimally. He was alive!
Elizabeth climbed
down as quickly as she dared, unconcerned with sap on her hands or twigs in her
hair. As she neared the ground, she called out to her sister. “Jane! Jane!
There is a man in the river!”
By the time
Elizabeth’s feet hit the ground, Jane was already running for the bank, but she
was hampered by her long skirts; her younger sister soon overtook her.
Elizabeth pushed through the shrubs and brambles that clustered along the
river, and Jane followed in her wake. “I believe he was this way.” Elizabeth
gestured to where she had observed the man. “There he is!”
His head and
arms rested on a rotting log while the rest of his body was submerged in the
river. Wet hair was plastered to his head, and his eyes were closed. Mud caked
his clothing and face. But one of the man’s fingers twitched. He was alive.
For now.
If I can
retrieve him from the river, I might be able to keep him alive. She
burned with the desire to help him. But he was still a good six feet away and
undoubtedly weighed more than either woman. Elizabeth turned to her sister, who
was yanking on her skirt, which had caught on a branch. “Jane? Can you extract
him from the river?” Jane was an aquamancer, a mage gifted with power over
water in all its forms.
Jane studied the
situation for a moment. “I cannot move him, but I can cause the water to
recede.” She reached out her hands, extending her magic to the river. Slowly
the water drew away from the man, revealing more of his torso lying in the
river mud. He was wearing a coat, waistcoat, and breeches. A gentleman then!
How curious. Elizabeth had assumed he was a fisherman who had fallen from a
boat.
Elizabeth
clambered down the muddy bank, thankful she had worn boots, and endeavored to
reach the log the man was clinging to, but it was too far. She risked slipping
and falling into the river—which would not help anyone.
“Is there any
way you can bring him closer?” she asked her sister.
Jane gestured,
and a wave formed in the middle of the river, a gentle swell that pushed the
man further up the bank.
Hooking her leg
around a bush, Elizabeth pulled on the end of the rotting log, attempting to
bring him closer. But when the log moved, the man lost his grip, slid backward
in the mud, and immediately sank into the river. “Oh no!” Without hesitating,
Elizabeth jumped after him. He would not drown if she could save him.
Fortunately, the water was shallow this close to the bank and she could stand.
It was murky,
and she had to root around with her hands to find the man’s body. She brushed
against an arm. Wrapping her fingers around it, she reached around for the
other arm and pulled his torso from the water. The man’s head hung slack, and
he did not appear to be breathing. Elizabeth was panting, her muscles
protesting the unaccustomed exercise. How can I possibly remove him from the
river?
Suddenly he was
buoyed from underneath, floating quite lightly on the surface. Elizabeth did
not know how Jane had managed such a feat. “Oh! Well done!” she called to her
sister. Now it was just a matter of tugging the man to the riverbank.
She propped him
up, noticing the grayish pallor of his skin. “Oh no,” she told the strange man.
“I did not undergo all this trouble for you to perish now.” She sent her
awareness into his body, willing his lungs to fulfill the function they were
designed to do. The barest hint of breath trickled out of his mouth. She sent
more energy into the man’s lungs. He inhaled, a slight flaring of his nostrils.
Good. That would do for the moment.
Getting her feet
underneath her in the mud of the riverbank, she held the man around his waist
and called up to Jane. “Can you help us to land?”
“Yes. I think I
understand this now.”
A wave, almost
like a giant hand, pushed the man gently upward until Jane could grab under his
arms. She pulled while Elizabeth pushed the man’s legs. She attempted to ignore
the impropriety of the situation; her mother would be appalled. Thank heavens the
man was insensible! Together they lifted him onto dry land. Elizabeth pulled
herself out after him, dripping water and covered in mud.
Jane held him
under his arms, and Elizabeth held his feet as they carried him through the
brambles at the river’s edge to a patch of grass just beyond. Even with two of
them, it was a struggle. He was tall and sodden, a dead weight in their arms.
As they laid him
gently on the grass, Jane inquired, “Can you save him?”
“I hope so.”
Elizabeth had managed to restore his breathing, but the truth was she
had never attempted to heal anyone this far gone. When she was summoned for a
healing, it was usually for a broken bone or similar accident. She could ease
pain for naturally occurring illnesses, but she could not heal them. Assisting
a drowning victim was something she had never faced. And God knew what else
might be troubling him.
But surely the
first task was to help him breathe without her assistance.
She extended her
magic, sensing the spark of life in his body. “He lives – at least at the
moment,” she told Jane. “But his lungs are full of water. Can you expel the
water from his body?”
Jane’s lips
thinned into a white line. “I have never commanded water inside a human body.
But I can make the attempt.” She stared fiercely at the man, no doubt using her
magical senses to identify the river water in the man’s lungs.
“Turn him on his
side,” Jane ordered. Elizabeth tugged on the man’s shoulders until he was lying
on his side.
Jane gestured
with quick, sharp strokes. Water started trickling out of the man’s mouth and
then gushed as the man coughed. When it was all expelled, the man coughed wetly
and started breathing with terrible rasping breaths.
Elizabeth rolled
him to his back and skimmed her hands a few inches above his body, searching
for those places where his life energies were not flowing freely. In fact,
energy was leaking out of his body in two different places. She pulled aside
his shirt and the bottom edge of his waistcoat to reveal a deep gash along his
ribs. Jane gasped at the blood oozing from the wound. “He was stabbed?”
“Yes. This is
not a matter of someone who simply fell out of a boat.”
Sensing more
trouble, she found a rip along the left leg of his breeches, revealing a long,
shallow knife cut. Jane gasped.
“Someone did not
care for this fellow.” Elizabeth endeavored to keep her voice level, but the
evidence of violence was disturbing.
Energy was
knotted at the back of his head. When she probed the area with her fingers, he
winced. “A contusion from a blow to the head,” she reported to Jane. “He also
sustained some damage to his ankle, but he will not be needing to walk for a
while yet.”
“He is fortunate
to still be alive,” Jane remarked. “Can you help him?”
Elizabeth took a
deep breath. “I think so. I cannot heal everything today, but I believe I can
repair the worst damage.”
She pushed her
hand through layers of coat and shirt so she could touch his flesh. This sort
of deep healing would not work without direct contact with his skin. At least
he was unconscious; it would be mortifying to touch a man who was awake! The
muscle and tissue longed to be whole again. She could almost hear the flesh
crying out at the violation created by the two slices of the knife. She sank
her awareness into the layers of muscle, fat, and tissue, carefully encouraging
it to knit back together.
Fortunately, the
ribs had prevented the knife from penetrating further into the chest. And the
slice on the leg was shallow. However,
she did not know how much blood the man had lost or if he might contract an
infection.
Next, she healed
the lung tissues damaged by water and eased the swelling at the back of his
head. Customarily she drew on the patient’s body to fuel such healing, but the
man’s energy was already vastly depleted. She was forced to draw on her own,
and even so, she could not fix everything. The stab wounds would be well on
their way to healing, but she could not cause them to disappear.
Exhausted, she slumped backward, landing
on her bottom in the grass.
Spells and Shadows is available on Amazon.
About the author
The author of more than sixteen
best-selling Regency and modern Pride and Prejudice variations, Victoria
Kincaid has a Ph.D. in English literature and runs a small business, er,
household with two children, a hyperactive dog, an overly affectionate cat, and
a husband who is not threatened by Mr. Darcy. They live near Washington DC,
where the inhabitants occasionally stop talking about politics long enough to
complain about the traffic.
On weekdays Victoria is a writer who
specializes in IT marketing (it’s more interesting than it sounds). She is a
member of the Magical Austen authors group and is the host of the annual Jane
Austen Fan Fiction Reader/Writer Get Together.
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